Difference between revisions of "Talk:Hamlet: Act 1 Scene 1"

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[[User:KalaKuival|KalaKuival]] 21:34, 27 February 2011 (UTC) - '''I''' made the discussion page here<br>
 
[[User:KalaKuival|KalaKuival]] 21:34, 27 February 2011 (UTC) - '''I''' made the discussion page here<br>
[[User:EMIBH|eejmensenikbenhet]] 16:47, 1 March 2011 (GMT+1) - Places first corrections, including: sentences above and character names
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[[User:EMIBH|eejmensenikbenhet]] 16:47, 1 March 2011 (GMT+1) - Placed first corrections including sentences above and character names

Revision as of 16:14, 1 March 2011

Discussion

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List of changes

Here is marked everything that is changed/corrected. (In order of appearance please.)

For this relief much thanks: 'tis bitter cold,
Txana irayo fpi fì[relief]. Tìwew nìtxur lu,
And I am sick at heart.
Ulte oeyä txe'lanur säspxin lu.

Have you had quiet guard?
Txon fnu lolu srak?

Not a mouse stirring.
Ke'u rolikx.

If you do meet Horatio and Marcellus,
Txo ngal ultxarun Horeytsyot sì Marselusìt,
The rivals of my watch, bid them make haste.
Alu melapo a hivawnu oehu, meforu piveng fwa mefo win säpi.

I think I hear them. Stand, ho! Who's there?
Oe fpìl oel mefot stawm. Ftäpang! Supel tsatengit tok?

Enter HORATIO and MARCELLUS
Fpxakìm HOREYTSYO sì MARSELUSÌ

Log

KalaKuival 21:34, 27 February 2011 (UTC) - I made the discussion page here
eejmensenikbenhet 16:47, 1 March 2011 (GMT+1) - Placed first corrections including sentences above and character names