Difference between revisions of "Talk:Hamlet: Act 1 Scene 1"

From Learn Na'vi Wiki
Jump to navigation Jump to search
m
 
(7 intermediate revisions by the same user not shown)
Line 5: Line 5:
 
==List of changes==
 
==List of changes==
  
Here is marked everything that is changed/corrected.
+
Here is marked everything that is changed/corrected. (In order of appearance please.)
 +
 
 +
For this relief much thanks: 'tis bitter cold,<br>
 +
'''Txana irayo fpi fì[relief]. Tìwew nìtxur lu,'''<br>
 +
And I am sick at heart. <br>
 +
'''Ulte oeyä txe'lanur säspxin lu.'''<br>
 +
 
 +
Have you had quiet guard? <br>
 +
'''Txon fnu lolu srak?'''<br>
 +
 
 +
Not a mouse stirring. <br>
 +
'''Ke'u rolikx.'''<br>
 +
 
 +
If you do meet Horatio and Marcellus, <br>
 +
'''Txo ngal ultxarun Horeytsyot sì Marselusìt,'''<br>
 +
The rivals of my watch, bid them make haste. <br>
 +
'''Alu melapo a hivawnu oehu, meforu piveng fwa mefo win säpi.'''<br>
 +
 
 +
I think I hear them. Stand, ho! Who's there? <br>
 +
'''Oe fpìl oel mefot stawm. Ftäpang! Supel tsatengit tok?''' <br>
 +
 
 +
Enter HORATIO and MARCELLUS<br>
 +
'''Fpxakìm HOREYTSYO sì MARSELUSÌ'''<br>
  
 
==Log==
 
==Log==
  
 
[[User:KalaKuival|KalaKuival]] 21:34, 27 February 2011 (UTC) - '''I''' made the discussion page here
 
[[User:KalaKuival|KalaKuival]] 21:34, 27 February 2011 (UTC) - '''I''' made the discussion page here
 +
 +
[[User:EMIBH|eejmensenikbenhet]] 16:47, 1 March 2011 (GMT+1) - Placed first corrections including sentences above and character names
 +
 +
[[User:EMIBH|eejmensenikbenhet]] 16:26, 22 March 2011 (GMT+1) - Corrected ''Enter Bernardo'' after first proofreading
 +
 +
[[User:EMIBH|eejmensenikbenhet]] 14:29, 2 April 2011 (GMT+1) - Corrected ''Enter Ghost'' after first proofreading

Latest revision as of 12:30, 2 April 2011

Discussion

Here we can discuss different mistakes and things to correct.

List of changes

Here is marked everything that is changed/corrected. (In order of appearance please.)

For this relief much thanks: 'tis bitter cold,
Txana irayo fpi fì[relief]. Tìwew nìtxur lu,
And I am sick at heart.
Ulte oeyä txe'lanur säspxin lu.

Have you had quiet guard?
Txon fnu lolu srak?

Not a mouse stirring.
Ke'u rolikx.

If you do meet Horatio and Marcellus,
Txo ngal ultxarun Horeytsyot sì Marselusìt,
The rivals of my watch, bid them make haste.
Alu melapo a hivawnu oehu, meforu piveng fwa mefo win säpi.

I think I hear them. Stand, ho! Who's there?
Oe fpìl oel mefot stawm. Ftäpang! Supel tsatengit tok?

Enter HORATIO and MARCELLUS
Fpxakìm HOREYTSYO sì MARSELUSÌ

Log

KalaKuival 21:34, 27 February 2011 (UTC) - I made the discussion page here

eejmensenikbenhet 16:47, 1 March 2011 (GMT+1) - Placed first corrections including sentences above and character names

eejmensenikbenhet 16:26, 22 March 2011 (GMT+1) - Corrected Enter Bernardo after first proofreading

eejmensenikbenhet 14:29, 2 April 2011 (GMT+1) - Corrected Enter Ghost after first proofreading