Talk:Hamlet: Act 1 Scene 1

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Here we can discuss different mistakes and things to correct.

List of changes

Here is marked everything that is changed/corrected. (In order of appearance please.)

For this relief much thanks: 'tis bitter cold,
Txana irayo fpi fì[relief]. Tìwew nìtxur lu,
And I am sick at heart.
Ulte oeyä txe'lanur säspxin lu.

Have you had quiet guard?
Txon fnu lolu srak?

Not a mouse stirring.
Ke'u rolikx.

If you do meet Horatio and Marcellus,
Txo ngal ultxarun Horeytsyot sì Marselusìt,
The rivals of my watch, bid them make haste.
Alu melapo a hivawnu oehu, meforu piveng fwa mefo win säpi.

I think I hear them. Stand, ho! Who's there?
Oe fpìl oel mefot stawm. Ftäpang! Supel tsatengit tok?



KalaKuival 21:34, 27 February 2011 (UTC) - I made the discussion page here

eejmensenikbenhet 16:47, 1 March 2011 (GMT+1) - Placed first corrections including sentences above and character names

eejmensenikbenhet 16:26, 22 March 2011 (GMT+1) - Corrected Enter Bernardo after first proofreading

eejmensenikbenhet 14:29, 2 April 2011 (GMT+1) - Corrected Enter Ghost after first proofreading