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− | For this relief much thanks: 'tis bitter cold, | + | For this relief much thanks: 'tis bitter cold,<br> |
− | '''Txana irayo fpi fì[relief]. Tìwew nìtxur lu,''' | + | '''Txana irayo fpi fì[relief]. Tìwew nìtxur lu,'''<br> |
− | And I am sick at heart. | + | And I am sick at heart. <br> |
− | '''Ulte oeyä txe'lanur säspxin lu.''' | + | '''Ulte oeyä txe'lanur säspxin lu.'''<br> |
− | Have you had quiet guard? | + | Have you had quiet guard? <br> |
− | '''Txon fnu lolu srak?''' | + | '''Txon fnu lolu srak?'''<br> |
− | Not a mouse stirring. | + | Not a mouse stirring. <br> |
− | '''Ke'u rolikx.''' | + | '''Ke'u rolikx.'''<br> |
− | If you do meet Horatio and Marcellus, | + | If you do meet Horatio and Marcellus, <br> |
− | '''Txo ngal ultxarun Horeytsyot sì Marselusìt,''' | + | '''Txo ngal ultxarun Horeytsyot sì Marselusìt,'''<br> |
− | The rivals of my watch, bid them make haste. | + | The rivals of my watch, bid them make haste. <br> |
− | '''Alu melapo a hivawnu oehu, meforu piveng fwa mefo win säpi.''' | + | '''Alu melapo a hivawnu oehu, meforu piveng fwa mefo win säpi.'''<br> |
− | I think I hear them. Stand, ho! Who's there? | + | I think I hear them. Stand, ho! Who's there? <br> |
− | '''Oe fpìl oel mefot stawm. Ftäpang! Supel tsatengit tok?''' | + | '''Oe fpìl oel mefot stawm. Ftäpang! Supel tsatengit tok?''' <br> |
− | Enter HORATIO and MARCELLUS | + | Enter HORATIO and MARCELLUS<br> |
− | '''Fpxakìm HOREYTSYO sì MARSELUSÌ''' | + | '''Fpxakìm HOREYTSYO sì MARSELUSÌ'''<br> |
==Log== | ==Log== | ||
[[User:KalaKuival|KalaKuival]] 21:34, 27 February 2011 (UTC) - '''I''' made the discussion page here | [[User:KalaKuival|KalaKuival]] 21:34, 27 February 2011 (UTC) - '''I''' made the discussion page here | ||
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+ | [[User:EMIBH|eejmensenikbenhet]] 16:47, 1 March 2011 (GMT+1) - Placed first corrections including sentences above and character names | ||
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+ | [[User:EMIBH|eejmensenikbenhet]] 16:26, 22 March 2011 (GMT+1) - Corrected ''Enter Bernardo'' after first proofreading | ||
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+ | [[User:EMIBH|eejmensenikbenhet]] 14:29, 2 April 2011 (GMT+1) - Corrected ''Enter Ghost'' after first proofreading |
Latest revision as of 12:30, 2 April 2011
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For this relief much thanks: 'tis bitter cold,
Txana irayo fpi fì[relief]. Tìwew nìtxur lu,
And I am sick at heart.
Ulte oeyä txe'lanur säspxin lu.
Have you had quiet guard?
Txon fnu lolu srak?
Not a mouse stirring.
Ke'u rolikx.
If you do meet Horatio and Marcellus,
Txo ngal ultxarun Horeytsyot sì Marselusìt,
The rivals of my watch, bid them make haste.
Alu melapo a hivawnu oehu, meforu piveng fwa mefo win säpi.
I think I hear them. Stand, ho! Who's there?
Oe fpìl oel mefot stawm. Ftäpang! Supel tsatengit tok?
Enter HORATIO and MARCELLUS
Fpxakìm HOREYTSYO sì MARSELUSÌ
Log
KalaKuival 21:34, 27 February 2011 (UTC) - I made the discussion page here
eejmensenikbenhet 16:47, 1 March 2011 (GMT+1) - Placed first corrections including sentences above and character names
eejmensenikbenhet 16:26, 22 March 2011 (GMT+1) - Corrected Enter Bernardo after first proofreading
eejmensenikbenhet 14:29, 2 April 2011 (GMT+1) - Corrected Enter Ghost after first proofreading